Need opinions. Is this too ricey?

[Jim]

Brian says:

[Jim]

Brians on his way to a ban

[SmitEvo]

jim deleted my sweet comeback, i win.

[STiSchucky]

found jims senior pic

[SmitEvo]

I am a ninja slayer, you do not dare.

[PSiedTSi]

Jim wrote:
Brian, what the hell is she doing on your car?

lowering it...

[Jim]

I found kirks:

[SmitEvo]

PSiedTSi wrote:
lowering it...

lol.................:D .

[Jim]

Here you go brian:

[STiSchucky]

[Jim]

[Jim]

Yeah brian your a ninja

[SmitEvo]

Jim wrote:
Here you go brian:

.

[SmitEvo]

Jim wrote:

Yeah brian your a ninja

n00b

[legacy-user-33]

Found Lucas Fatland

[Jim]

[ichibankilla]

What is this, 5 pages in a half an hour. haha

[Jim]

hey we found lucas on some random girls myspace... hold on a second

[legacy-user-33]

Heres kirk..

[ichibankilla]

how exactly did it turn into this?