Awesome new rap artist
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Tad218 wrote:
"life full of a sorrow" is a pretty good song
Are you serious, Maybe the lyrics are cool, but he has no rapping skill what so ever, i'll give him credit for doing it, but you seriously need to step up your game if you think you are a rap artist.. -
Cakija wrote:
thanks alot for the great comments, they really dont bother me, as for the respect, thanks alot, and yes i know im not the best rapper alive, but i am better then alot of my friends my age, and if you dont like my music or videos dont wathc or listen to it, im pretty damn proud of what i do, and i do most of the work my self so for a 15 year old i tihnk im ok, getin into tjams topic bout fargo, your rigt nothing here revolves around hiphop so yes it is hard, and im not trying to become a big rap star, even thou i will be getting a famous in the bosnian game, but not because i wanted to, but because people think ive got talent for my age. and for does who where wondering obivously that kid on myspace is me on here.and i really dont like battling because ive got better things to do but tjams no hard feelings but ive gottta diss back, but ive gotta agrew it be kinda fun so here is my part
Man You Claim You Got A Job And I Think You Need To Shut Up
And Also you think you're in college, but that shit's for fuckups
You claimed to be at fargos college level, exaggerating bitch how?
But I guess your punches low-budget, I've never senior discount
Seriously I read your rhymes their , fuckin wanted to die then
So I'll beat this bitch 3 times with my fuckin jaw as I Tri-Dent
Fuck a window cause your pain amount will be much higher
And just cause you're a street racer, don't mean you can drop fire
See you're courageous kid, but damn for this, to hell I will fall
Cause if you didn't live in your own world...you'd have no life at all
Enough of the shit talking homie, fuck your weak body blows
"Yo, I'll rip you on the mic ab0ve", but you text better than audio
It's down to this....I have lost one battle and so have you
But fucker I actually won mine, you got your Win off of a DQ
Claiming Your WRX Is Da Shit, My Non Turbo Will Eat It Like A Anoconda,
Step Next To You, Rev Up ,Smoke Ya And Burn Out In My Honda
And Yes Ive Got Less Litters Den MY 2.0 Bottle Of Fanta
But Fukkin Wid Cakija, U Really Dont Want Ta
I Kno Wer Ya Live So Ill Find Ya, Murdera, n Den Ya Hide Ya
My Rhymes Are Energetic
And Your Car Sounds Shitty and Looks Pathetic
Your a Show Off THat Wants To Get Noticed For Suckin Dick Shit
Actin Untouchable But Watch Me How I Rap Shit
TJams You Betta Respect This
I Take A Cakija N Cut Your Body Up Slowly
Man You Don Kno Me
So Don Try To Be A Mental Wanna Teach Me A Lesson?
You Don Even Record, Y DA Fuck R U On Da Board
When Your Poor Cuz A Mic Is Somethin You Can Not Afford
What You Rappin for Bitch You Don Even Make No Sense
Thinkin You Gon Hurt Me With Your Weak Textanyways, not much their its kind of late so cant reall think of shit.
Claim to have a job, shit I got a life
A house, 3 cars, baby and a wife
I can step to the mic and put on a show
with Rhythm, Beats and lyrics that flowBut you comin' up thinking, your Mike Tyson
Someone should revoke your lyrical License
15 years old, you don't know dick about shit
Hang it up now, before you get lit...
up by someone who takes your words to heart
Gets up in your face and tears you apart
There's no reason for guns in rap as I'm seein'
Biggy & Tupac would I'm sure be agreein'
Fuck the violence and those who portray it
And fuck the DJ's who constantly play it
LIfes short, no need for a permanent vacation
Arm yourself with knowledge and a good education. -
I have to head off to work...was fun. And for the record, I have no problem doing this live either.
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tjamz wrote:
Claim to have a job, shit I got a life
A house, 3 cars, baby and a wife
I can step to the mic and put on a show
with Rhythm, Beats and lyrics that flowBut you comin' up thinking, your Mike Tyson
Someone should revoke your lyrical License
15 years old, you don't know dick about shit
Hang it up now, before you get lit...
up by someone who takes your words to heart
Gets up in your face and tears you apart
There's no reason for guns in rap as I'm seein'
Biggy & Tupac would I'm sure be agreein'
Fuck the violence and those who portray it
And fuck the DJ's who constantly play it
LIfes short, no need for a permanent vacation
Arm yourself with knowledge and a good education.There ya go tjams you just owned him.:icon_thumleft:
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haha. Chuck > Cakija.
Nice rap chuck
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Cakija wrote:
did not hope out of da eclipse and shooting the 13 year old was jus a lil fun endin to make people laugh or some shit but as u all know its fake lol
lol alright...just didnt think that was something a f-m rap artist should do if he wants to make it big
wannabe wrote:
Are you serious, Maybe the lyrics are cool, but he has no rapping skill what so ever, i'll give him credit for doing it, but you seriously need to step up your game if you think you are a rap artist..
yeah was pretty much referring to the lyrics. -
i give it to tjams on that one. at least i can understand what he's sayin. as for cakija go watch 8 mile. (starts with pencil and paper) "and don't come back until something don't hit you"
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Good battle tjams, mad respect for that one you dont even rap and you came at me with something real nice i liked it ive gotta give it to you, as for all the others i dont know what to say, i know im not the best rapper, if you dont like me dont listen to my music , so if a moderator could please lock this thread up?
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A couple pages later, time to make an appearance
I found all your rhymes at Wal-Mart, they were on clearance
Past the shirts, the shoes, and all the candied yams
All dumped in a box labled "Spit by TJamz"You wouldn't believe it, what a incredible deal
the only ones to leave the store were because of a steal
But none for me, my lines tell a story
about winning a battle, and not being post-whorey -
y0...check it...y0...check this...y0...werd...y0 check this shit out...y0 check y0...
my summery of rap music 101 ^^^
This is as close to rap that I get...listen to the song "Open Your Eyes"
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You guys can't be serious....
Tjamz 'owning' a 15 yr old ...I must be dilerious
This kid invests time into his dream
Only to come on here and have his @$$ ripped a new seam
He may not have the rhythm of modern rap
But most modern rap artists really are crap!Check out Talib Kweli, Mos Def, or Common to name a few
Get off Biggie and Pac, as those cats are through
No disrespect to them tho for help paving the way
For kids like Cajika to have a dream todayYou may not like everything a new artist puts out
But what they are doing, may someday sprout
Everyones so quick to come on here and hate
You try to do better but what I saw wasn't that great
I've seen more poetic justice in an Ann Landers script
and yes Tjamz I think you were just GRIPPED -
speed_ricer69 wrote:
i give it to tjams on that one. at least i can understand what he's sayin. as for cakija go watch 8 mile. (starts with pencil and paper) "and don't come back until something don't hit you"and you should return to english, cause you don't put quotation marks at the beginning and end of a sentence that isn't a quote.
Actually, here I will take YOU to school as well....
"In fact dog, here's a pencil, go home, write some sh*t, make it suspenseful; and don't come back 'til somethin' dope hits you."
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nismoluvr wrote:
and you should return to english, cause you don't put quotation marks at the beginning and end of a sentence that isn't a quote.Actually, here I will take YOU to school as well....
"In fact dog, here's a pencil, go home, write some sh*t, make it suspenseful; and don't come back 'til somethin' dope hits you."
I thought 12 year old censored the word shit -
I am sorry but what you "rap", is straight garbage.
Why, at 15 years old are you talking about the things you do? You are just so consumed in being something you aren’t you end up failing to realize what and who you are.
That is why I am sick of hip hop as a whole, artists aspiring to something other than what they are, and always deeming it necessary to speak "there" imaginary life story through a mic.
Why couldn’t you apply it to something that would be good for the community instead of, gangster gangster look at my gun, I'm 13. Believe it or not some dumbass kid is going to watch that and be inspired to take action as you did in your cheesy just for fun video. Yes implying that you, yes you, are a role model and think impregnating the idea of that it is cool to pick up a gun and use it. Is that something you even thought about, "action applied to principal is often imitated."???
It makes me sick to think about. And you say you have no time to battle like your above it yet you fail to realize the 4 elements of hip hop. MC, DJ, Break dancing and Graffiti. Instead you emphasize on being a bad ass gangster shooting people up like it’s your job.
As far as I am concerned you are not an "artist", and are just a disgrace to the hip hop community as a whole. Quit being influenced by uneducated retards. Listen to something other than your garbage cant get my fucking style out of 94' bs, (thank you Aesop') might help your whole persona and mental image of what hip hop has to be...
I’m done for now
Just remember you are making music that represents yourself as a person not a billboard for how hardcore you and your friends keep the F/M
And dont even get me started on the direct negative effect it just gave the tintmasters name, being plastered on a car in your video. Something if I was them I would not want to be known for, guns, and the taking of a life of another person.
Brag all you want, but true hip hop heads are just going to think your the same as every other Bling Bling, no talent artist out there
Cheers
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wow, i want to say thanks to 2slo and i have to agree 100% with what he says, and your right im not into that whole gangster shit and i never thought that me makin fun out of me fake shottin a kid could acually happen and that some little kid might acualy get inspired by what i did and think its cool and serious and go and acualy do it, and that acualy wasnt my whole purpose of rapping but someone when you think about it its what people are gona think when they see the video, and im not trying to be known as a gangster but when i think it all thru people probably think of me as one when im really not, im not trying to be anything im not, and you all will hear that with my new future songs comin out with will invlove a WHole new style of lyrics, musc,flow beats and everything, once again 2slo thanks alot for all that writing really made me realise alot of things
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925JL925 wrote:
I should kick the shit out of this kid. Wow how dumb can he be. Yah im 16 and ill admit i can be fuckin retarded sometimes but i never take it that far. Get a life kid trying to rap isnt working for you makes you look like a douche bag.no need for fightin, relax, if u don like my stuff jus dont listen
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