Awesome new rap artist
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I have to head off to work...was fun. And for the record, I have no problem doing this live either.
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tjamz wrote:
Claim to have a job, shit I got a life
A house, 3 cars, baby and a wife
I can step to the mic and put on a show
with Rhythm, Beats and lyrics that flowBut you comin' up thinking, your Mike Tyson
Someone should revoke your lyrical License
15 years old, you don't know dick about shit
Hang it up now, before you get lit...
up by someone who takes your words to heart
Gets up in your face and tears you apart
There's no reason for guns in rap as I'm seein'
Biggy & Tupac would I'm sure be agreein'
Fuck the violence and those who portray it
And fuck the DJ's who constantly play it
LIfes short, no need for a permanent vacation
Arm yourself with knowledge and a good education.There ya go tjams you just owned him.:icon_thumleft:
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haha. Chuck > Cakija.
Nice rap chuck
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Cakija wrote:
did not hope out of da eclipse and shooting the 13 year old was jus a lil fun endin to make people laugh or some shit but as u all know its fake lol
lol alright...just didnt think that was something a f-m rap artist should do if he wants to make it big
wannabe wrote:
Are you serious, Maybe the lyrics are cool, but he has no rapping skill what so ever, i'll give him credit for doing it, but you seriously need to step up your game if you think you are a rap artist..
yeah was pretty much referring to the lyrics. -
i give it to tjams on that one. at least i can understand what he's sayin. as for cakija go watch 8 mile. (starts with pencil and paper) "and don't come back until something don't hit you"
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Good battle tjams, mad respect for that one you dont even rap and you came at me with something real nice i liked it ive gotta give it to you, as for all the others i dont know what to say, i know im not the best rapper, if you dont like me dont listen to my music , so if a moderator could please lock this thread up?
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A couple pages later, time to make an appearance
I found all your rhymes at Wal-Mart, they were on clearance
Past the shirts, the shoes, and all the candied yams
All dumped in a box labled "Spit by TJamz"You wouldn't believe it, what a incredible deal
the only ones to leave the store were because of a steal
But none for me, my lines tell a story
about winning a battle, and not being post-whorey -
y0...check it...y0...check this...y0...werd...y0 check this shit out...y0 check y0...
my summery of rap music 101 ^^^
This is as close to rap that I get...listen to the song "Open Your Eyes"
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You guys can't be serious....
Tjamz 'owning' a 15 yr old ...I must be dilerious
This kid invests time into his dream
Only to come on here and have his @$$ ripped a new seam
He may not have the rhythm of modern rap
But most modern rap artists really are crap!Check out Talib Kweli, Mos Def, or Common to name a few
Get off Biggie and Pac, as those cats are through
No disrespect to them tho for help paving the way
For kids like Cajika to have a dream todayYou may not like everything a new artist puts out
But what they are doing, may someday sprout
Everyones so quick to come on here and hate
You try to do better but what I saw wasn't that great
I've seen more poetic justice in an Ann Landers script
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speed_ricer69 wrote:
i give it to tjams on that one. at least i can understand what he's sayin. as for cakija go watch 8 mile. (starts with pencil and paper) "and don't come back until something don't hit you"and you should return to english, cause you don't put quotation marks at the beginning and end of a sentence that isn't a quote.
Actually, here I will take YOU to school as well....
"In fact dog, here's a pencil, go home, write some sh*t, make it suspenseful; and don't come back 'til somethin' dope hits you."
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nismoluvr wrote:
and you should return to english, cause you don't put quotation marks at the beginning and end of a sentence that isn't a quote.Actually, here I will take YOU to school as well....
"In fact dog, here's a pencil, go home, write some sh*t, make it suspenseful; and don't come back 'til somethin' dope hits you."
I thought 12 year old censored the word shit -
I am sorry but what you "rap", is straight garbage.
Why, at 15 years old are you talking about the things you do? You are just so consumed in being something you aren’t you end up failing to realize what and who you are.
That is why I am sick of hip hop as a whole, artists aspiring to something other than what they are, and always deeming it necessary to speak "there" imaginary life story through a mic.
Why couldn’t you apply it to something that would be good for the community instead of, gangster gangster look at my gun, I'm 13. Believe it or not some dumbass kid is going to watch that and be inspired to take action as you did in your cheesy just for fun video. Yes implying that you, yes you, are a role model and think impregnating the idea of that it is cool to pick up a gun and use it. Is that something you even thought about, "action applied to principal is often imitated."???
It makes me sick to think about. And you say you have no time to battle like your above it yet you fail to realize the 4 elements of hip hop. MC, DJ, Break dancing and Graffiti. Instead you emphasize on being a bad ass gangster shooting people up like it’s your job.
As far as I am concerned you are not an "artist", and are just a disgrace to the hip hop community as a whole. Quit being influenced by uneducated retards. Listen to something other than your garbage cant get my fucking style out of 94' bs, (thank you Aesop') might help your whole persona and mental image of what hip hop has to be...
I’m done for now
Just remember you are making music that represents yourself as a person not a billboard for how hardcore you and your friends keep the F/M
And dont even get me started on the direct negative effect it just gave the tintmasters name, being plastered on a car in your video. Something if I was them I would not want to be known for, guns, and the taking of a life of another person.
Brag all you want, but true hip hop heads are just going to think your the same as every other Bling Bling, no talent artist out there
Cheers
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wow, i want to say thanks to 2slo and i have to agree 100% with what he says, and your right im not into that whole gangster shit and i never thought that me makin fun out of me fake shottin a kid could acually happen and that some little kid might acualy get inspired by what i did and think its cool and serious and go and acualy do it, and that acualy wasnt my whole purpose of rapping but someone when you think about it its what people are gona think when they see the video, and im not trying to be known as a gangster but when i think it all thru people probably think of me as one when im really not, im not trying to be anything im not, and you all will hear that with my new future songs comin out with will invlove a WHole new style of lyrics, musc,flow beats and everything, once again 2slo thanks alot for all that writing really made me realise alot of things
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925JL925 wrote:
I should kick the shit out of this kid. Wow how dumb can he be. Yah im 16 and ill admit i can be fuckin retarded sometimes but i never take it that far. Get a life kid trying to rap isnt working for you makes you look like a douche bag.no need for fightin, relax, if u don like my stuff jus dont listen
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925JL925 wrote:
Naw i just dont like you. And i mean you should be all about fighting you wannabe gangbanger. Get a life.Umm why? Drama, for what reason?...
Obviously you cannot learn from others mistakes.
Reading>you.
The kid has just came to reality with this shit yet you seem to defunk the idea of him even posting the above thread where he states he is not even into that garbage. So quit instigating and go back to inbreeding the rest of Valley City.
ill admit i can be fuckin retarded sometimes but i never take it that far
Naw i just dont like you. And i mean you should be all about fighting you wannabe gangbanger. Get a life.
you just took it that far
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